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快要答辩了，帮忙看一下我的翻译有没有错误，不胜感激rn摘要rnThe abstractrn喷雾泵站是采煤工作面的重要设备，在减小煤尘与瓦斯的危险和改善工作面的环境上起着重要的作用。rnwater pump station is an important equipment in the coal face.It plays an important role in redusing the danger of dust and gas concentrations.rn喷雾泵站主要应用于采煤机的喷雾除尘，是采煤工作面喷雾系统的主要组成部分。rnwater pump station is mainly used in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter.rnIt is a main part of the aspirating system of the coal face.rn喷雾泵主要由由电动机，减速器，曲轴，连杆，十字头，柱塞，泵体组成。设计的任务主要是对喷雾泵进行设计并进行必要的校核。rnwater pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body mostly. The main task of design is designing water pump and make the necessary intensity checking.rn本文首先介绍了喷雾泵的结构和特点，然后根据压力与流量的要求选择电动机和曲轴的转速，进而对减速器，曲柄连杆机构，泵体进行设计并且对各个部件进行强度校核。rnThis paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, and then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.rn设计的内容主要有方案的选定，减速器的设计，泵的结构形式的选择，泵体的设计，曲柄连杆机构的设计，十字头的设计。rnThe main content of the is selecting programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of structure of the pump selection, the design of the pump body,and the design of the connecting rod, the design of the crosshead.rn该喷雾泵结构紧凑，占地面积小，符合采煤工作面的要求。rnThe structure of the water pump is compact ,and the water pump covers small area.It accord with the need of theULSAeqjfL coalface.rn关键词：喷雾泵 曲轴 减速器 曲柄连杆机构rnkey words: water pump crankshaft speed reducer connecting rod我的意见哈~
喷雾泵站是采煤工作面的重要设备，在减小煤尘与瓦斯的危险和改善工作面的环境上起着重要的作用。
water pump station is an important equipment in the coal face.It plays an important role in redusing the danger of dust and gas concentrations.
*漏译了"改善工作面的环境"
water pump station is an important equipment in the coal face.It plays an important role not only in redusing the danger of dust and gas concentrations but also in improving the environment of the working surface.
喷雾泵站主要应用于采煤机的喷雾除尘，是采煤工作面喷雾系统的主要组成部分。
water pump station is mainly used in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter.
It is a main part of the aspirating system of the coal face.
*技术,设备的应用有更准确的词apply.还有就是前后用词应避免重复
water pump station is mainly applied in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter.It constitutes the vital part of the whole aspirating system of the coal face.
喷雾泵主要由由电动机，减速器，曲轴，连杆，十字头，柱塞，泵体组成。设计的任务主要是对喷雾泵进行设计并进行必要的校核。
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body mostly. The main task of design is designing water pump and make the necessary intensity checking.
*一系列词作同等成分,后面应用and.再说compose后面也不能少.前后design在汉语中都是语病,你认为正确可以不改.进行时的用法也似不妥.make the necessary intensity checking的主语不当,句子逻辑关系不明.
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, and pump body. Its main task is devised to carry on the design to water pump and make the necessary intensity checking of it.
本文首先介绍了喷雾泵的结构和特点，然后根据压力与流量的要求选择电动机和曲轴的转速，进而对减速器，曲柄连杆机构，泵体进行设计并且对各个部件进行强度校核。
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, and then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.
*此段酷似机译产品.很难令人明白.还是逻辑方面出错.choose的主语呢?总不能是This paper.原文的问题.很难去改,还有the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft在原文找不到对应处.另外on the basis of ...不如用according to. 另外the motor and the speed of the crankshaft应该是the speed of the motor and the crankshaft.另外then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.缺少递进关系.
最后把时态调为一致.下面改一下,只求顺嘴些.
In the first place,this paper introduced the structure and characteristics of water pumphttp://www.rixia.cc. Afterward, it chose the speed of the motor and the crankshaft according to the pressure and flux requirement. then designed the speed reducer, connecting rod and pump body,furthermore checked intensity of every part.
设计的内容主要有方案的选定，减速器的设计，泵的结构形式的选择，泵体的设计，曲柄连杆机构的设计，十字头的设计。
The main content of the is selecting programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of structure of the pump selection, the design of the pump body,and the design of the connecting rod, the design of the crosshead.
*哎~无话可说了
The main content included the choice of programme, the design of the speed reducer,the pump body, the connecting rod,and the crossheadthe, as well as the selection of the structural style of the pump.
该喷雾泵结构紧凑，占地面积小，符合采煤工作面的要求。
The structure is compact ,and the water pump covers small area.It accord with the need of the coalface.
*哎~最后一句了
because of the compact structure and the small covering area of this water pump,it can fulfil the need of the coalface.
关键词：喷雾泵 曲轴 减速器 曲柄连杆机构
key words: water pump crankshaft speed reducer connecting rod
喷雾泵站是采煤工作面的重要设备，在减小煤尘与瓦斯的危险和改善工作面的环境上起着重要的作用。
water pump station is an important equipment in the coal face.It plays an important role in redusing the danger of dust and gas concentrations.
*漏译了"改善工作面的环境"
water pump station is an important equipment in the coal face.It plays an important role not only in redusing the danger of dust and gas concentrations but also in improving the environment of the working surface.
喷雾泵站主要应用于采煤机的喷雾除尘，是采煤工作面喷雾系统的主要组成部分。
water pump station is mainly used in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter.
It is a main part of the aspirating system of the coal face.
*技术,设备的应用有更准确的词apply.还有就是前后用词应避免重复
water pump station is mainly applied in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter.It constitutes the vital part of the whole aspirating system of the coal face.
喷雾泵主要由由电动机，减速器，曲轴，连杆，十字头，柱塞，泵体组成。设计的任务主要是对喷雾泵进行设计并进行必要的校核。
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body mostly. The main task of design is designing water pump and make the necessary intensity checking.
*一系列词作同等成分,后面应用and.再说compose后面也不能少.前后design在汉语中都是语病,你认为正确可以不改.进行时的用法也似不妥.make the necessary intensity checking的主语不当,句子逻辑关系不明.
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, and pump body. Its main task is devised to carry on the design to water pump and make the necessary intensity checking of it.
本文首先介绍了喷雾泵的结构和特点，然后根据压力与流量的要求选择电动机和曲轴的转速，进而对减速器，曲柄连杆机构，泵体进行设计并且对各个部件进行强度校核。
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, and then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.
*此段酷似机译产品.很难令人明白.还是逻辑方面出错.choose的主语呢?总不能是This paper.原文的问题.很难去改,还有the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft在原文找不到对应处.另外on the basis of ...不如用according to. 另外the motor and the speed of the crankshaft应该是the speed of the motor and the crankshaft.另外then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.缺少递进关系.
最后把时态调为一致.下面改一下,只求顺嘴些.
In the first place,this paper introduced the structure and characteristics of water pumphttp://www.rixia.cc. Afterward, it chose the speed of the motor and the crankshaft according to the pressure and flux requirement. then designed the speed reducer, connecting rod and pump body,furthermore checked intensity of every part.
设计的内容主要有方案的选定，减速器的设计，泵的结构形式的选择，泵体的设计，曲柄连杆机构的设计，十字头的设计。
The main content of the is selecting programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of structure of the pump selection, the design of the pump body,and the design of the connecting rod, the design of the crosshead.
*哎~无话可说了
The main content included the choice of programme, the design of the speed reducer,the pump body, the connecting rod,and the crossheadthe, as well as the selection of the structural style of the pump.
该喷雾泵结构紧凑，占地面积小，符合采煤工作面的要求。
The structure is compact ,and the water pump covers small area.It accord with the need of the coalface.
*哎~最后一句了
because of the compact structure and the small covering area of this water pump,it can fulfil the need of the coalface.
关键词：喷雾泵 曲轴 减速器 曲柄连杆机构
key words: water pump crankshaft speed reducer connecting rod
翻译得不错，修改如下：
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The Abstract
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Water pump station is an important equipment in coal mining. It plays an important role in reducing the danger of dust and gas concentrations.
Water pump station is mainly used in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter. It is a main part of the aspirating system of the coal mining works.
Water pump is mainly composed of motor, speed reducer, crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body. The main task of design is designing water pump and make the necessary intensity checking.
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement, and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft, followed by the design of the speed reducer, connecting rod, pump body and finally the intensity checking of every part.
The main designing content is the selection of programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of pump structure, the design of the pump body, the design of the connecting rod, and the design of the crosshead.
The structure of the water pump is compact and only need a small footprint. It accord with the need of the coal mining industry.
Key words: water pump crankshaft speed reducer connecting rod
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The Abstract
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Water pump station is an important equipment in coal mining. It plays an important role in reducing the danger of dust and gas concentrations.
Water pump station is mainly used in the mist spray and aspirating of coal cutter. It is a main part of the aspirating system of the coal mining works.
Water pump is mainly composed of motor, speed reducer, crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body. The main task of design is designing water pump and make the necessary intensity checking.
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement, and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft, followed by the design of the speed reducer, connecting rod, pump body and finally the intensity checking of every part.
The main designing content is the selection of programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of pump structure, the design of the pump body, the design of the connecting rod, and the design of the crosshead.
The structure of the water pump is compact and only need a small footprint. It accord with the need of the coal mining industry.
Key words: water pump crankshaft speed reducer connecting rod
细节方面有点瑕疵。
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body mostly.
最好把pump body前的逗号换成and，英语的习惯是无论并列多少个名词，倒数两个的中间要加and: 1,2,3,4 and 5.
这段瑕疵较多：
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, and then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.
1、就语法角度，introduce用了过去时，and then 后的choose也应两边对称,时态一致用chose,而且and then前的逗号是多余的（后面……,then是正确用法）。
2、从语感方面，and太多，连词应变变花样，建议这样改：
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump. Moroever, it chose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure as well as flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod and pump body to(用动词不定式表目的较好) check intensity of every part.
这一段：
The main content of the is selecting programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of structure of the pump selection, the design of the pump body,（逗号多余）and the design of the connecting rod, the design of the crosshead.
其他没什么了。
water pump is composed of motor, speed reducer ,crankshaft, connecting bar, crosshead, piston, pump body mostly.
最好把pump body前的逗号换成and，英语的习惯是无论并列多少个名词，倒数两个的中间要加and: 1,2,3,4 and 5.
这段瑕疵较多：
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump, and then choose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure and flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod, pump body and then check intensity of every part.
1、就语法角度，introduce用了过去时，and then 后的choose也应两边对称,时态一致用chose,而且and then前的逗号是多余的（后面……,then是正确用法）。
2、从语感方面，and太多，连词应变变花样，建议这样改：
This paper first introduced the structure and characteristics of the water pump. Moroever, it chose the motor and the speed of the crankshaft on the basis of filling the pressure as well as flux requirement and the choice of motor revolutions of the crankshaft,then design the speed reducer , connecting rod and pump body to(用动词不定式表目的较好) check intensity of every part.
这一段：
The main content of the is selecting programme, the design of the speed reducer, the selection of structure of the pump selection, the design of the pump body,（逗号多余）and the design of the connecting rod, the design of the crosshead.
其他没什么了。
Abstract
Spray Pump Station is a major coal face equipment, reduce coal dust and gas in the face of danger and improving the environment played an important role.
Shearer spray pumping stations are mainly used in the spray dust, spray coal face is the main component of the system.
Spray pumps from the main motor, reducer, crankshaft, connecting rod, crosshead, plunger, the body composition. The main task of designing the spray pump design and carry out the necessary verification.
This paper first introduced the spray pump on the structure and characteristics, and then under the pressure and flow asked to select the motor and crankshaft speed as well as on the reducer, crank linkage, the body design and strength of all parts check.
The main design o日夏养花网f the selected programmes, reducer design, the structure of the pump selection, the design of the body, crank linkage of design, crosshead design.
The spray pump compact, small footprint, in line with the requirements of coal face.
Key words: spray pumps crank crank linkage reducer
没错
Spray Pump Station is a major coal face equipment, reduce coal dust and gas in the face of danger and improving the environment played an important role.
Shearer spray pumping stations are mainly used in the spray dust, spray coal face is the main component of the system.
Spray pumps from the main motor, reducer, crankshaft, connecting rod, crosshead, plunger, the body composition. The main task of designing the spray pump design and carry out the necessary verification.
This paper first introduced the spray pump on the structure and characteristics, and then under the pressure and flow asked to select the motor and crankshaft speed as well as on the reducer, crank linkage, the body design and strength of all parts check.
The main design o日夏养花网f the selected programmes, reducer design, the structure of the pump selection, the design of the body, crank linkage of design, crosshead design.
The spray pump compact, small footprint, in line with the requirements of coal face.
Key words: spray pumps crank crank linkage reducer
没错
很专业的英语...
MS没错误= =
MS没错误= =
你不会利用翻译工具吗？不会问老师吗？这个答辩老师你问不到可以问别的英文老师啊，做人要聪明点！
哪位英语高手能帮我翻译一下啊？？？
I should have realized that alcohol was getting hold of me when I started to become secretive in my drinking. I began to have to have supplies on hand for the people "who might come in". And of course, a half empty bottle wasnx27t worth keeping, so I finished it up and naturally had to get more in right away for the people who "might come in unexpectedly". But I was always the unexpected person who had to finish the bottle. I couldnx27t go to one wine store and look the man honestly in the face and buy a bottle, as I used to do when I had parties and entertained and normal drinking. I had to give him a story and ask him the same question over and over again, well, now, how many will the bottle serve? I wanted him to be sure that I wasnx27t the one who was going to drink the whole bottle. I had to hide, as a great many people have had to do. I did my hiding in the hampers and in my dresser drawers. When we begin to do things like that with alcohol, somethingx27s gone wrong. I needed it, and I knew I was drinking too much, but I wasnx27t conscious of the fact that I should stop. I kept on. My home at that time was a place to mill around in. I wandered from room to room, thinking, drinking, drinking and thinking.当我开始偷偷摸摸喝酒的时候，我应该意识到我已经彻底的被酒精控制了.
我开始不得不为那些能来的人准备酒.
当然，半瓶子的酒是不值得留着的,
所以，我就把它喝光，再马上弄到更多的酒，以备不时之需.
但是不时之需的那个总日夏养花网是我自己，每次都是我自己把酒喝光.
我不能像以前那样，参加聚会或者是正常的娱乐喝酒的时候那样，
去酒馆看着那里的伙计然后诚实的告诉他我要买一瓶酒。
我不得不给他讲一个故事，反复的问他们一个同样的问题,
那么，这瓶酒要给我多少？
我想让他确信，我不是想把整瓶酒都喝掉.
我必须隐蔽我自己酗酒，就像许多酗酒的人一样.
我把酒藏到我的脏衣服筐里，藏到我的袖子里.
当我开始对酒精产生那种想法的时候，已经铸成大错了.
我需要酒精，我也知道我喝的太多了，但是我没有一个清醒的意识让我戒掉酒.
我继续这么喝下去，我的家在那时候成了我一个闲逛的地方.
我从一个房间走到另一个房间，再从另一个房间走回来，一边思考一边喝酒，
一边喝酒一边思考.
我开始不得不为那些能来的人准备酒.
当然，半瓶子的酒是不值得留着的,
所以，我就把它喝光，再马上弄到更多的酒，以备不时之需.
但是不时之需的那个总日夏养花网是我自己，每次都是我自己把酒喝光.
我不能像以前那样，参加聚会或者是正常的娱乐喝酒的时候那样，
去酒馆看着那里的伙计然后诚实的告诉他我要买一瓶酒。
我不得不给他讲一个故事，反复的问他们一个同样的问题,
那么，这瓶酒要给我多少？
我想让他确信，我不是想把整瓶酒都喝掉.
我必须隐蔽我自己酗酒，就像许多酗酒的人一样.
我把酒藏到我的脏衣服筐里，藏到我的袖子里.
当我开始对酒精产生那种想法的时候，已经铸成大错了.
我需要酒精，我也知道我喝的太多了，但是我没有一个清醒的意识让我戒掉酒.
我继续这么喝下去，我的家在那时候成了我一个闲逛的地方.
我从一个房间走到另一个房间，再从另一个房间走回来，一边思考一边喝酒，
一边喝酒一边思考.
我应明白酒精渐渐的我当我开始成为秘密我喝酒。 我开始为人的手上有供应"人可能有"。 与半的空瓶当然，不保留，所以我就完成了，当然不得不获取更多的马上"可能会有意外 」 的人值得。 是的但我始终是意外的人有完成瓶子。 我不能去一个酒店及面对诚实地看那人，购买一瓶，我用来做过各方及娱乐和正常饮酒。 我不得不给他的故事，问他同样的问题上，为超过再次，好，现在，多少将瓶子服务吗？ 我想他是确保我不是一个人去整个瓶的饮料。 我要隐藏，做了很多人的伟大作为。 我做了我和我梳妆台抽屉，hampers 中的隐藏。 当我们开始酒精这样做时，东西是坏的。 我需要，我知道我喝太多，但我不知道，我应停止。 我坚持。 我的家，当时是一个位置，以便在磨。 徘徊客房，房间的思维、 饮料、 酒和思维。
我早该意识到，当我开始偷偷的喝酒的时候，酒精就掌握了我。我手上开始有足够的酒来供应给任何可能出现的人。当然 半瓶酒是能保留的，所以我喝光了，马上买了更多酒来款待不时会来的人。但那个不时会来把酒喝光的人总是我。我不能再以开聚会或正常饮酒的理由一脸诚实的去同一个酒店买酒。我不得不编一个故事并且反复重复同一个问题，恩，好吧，现在，我能拿走多少酒？我要让他确信我不会一个人把酒喝光。我必须把它们藏起来，像许多人不得不做的那样。我确实藏起了它们，在篮子里，在衣柜抽屉里，但当我们开始做些貌似需要酒精的事情时，事情就出了问题。我需要酒，我知道我可能喝太多了，但我不够清醒让自己停下来，只能继续。当时，我家是在工厂周围的地方。我从一间房晃悠到另一间，试图清醒，继续喝，喝着喝着，又试图清醒。
做翻译题呀？自己用翻译软件译一下啦，虽然不会很准确，大概还是能理解滴。。。。。。。这么长叫人翻译，不现实，太折腾人了！
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（姓名和地址）<这个是收款人地址,按照合同上写的填就行了不需要确切意思>
1)保单号及保单日期是按照你的要求来制作
2)索赔金额
3)最主要的是在合同条款下负责人违反其义务(或者可以说成不履行他的职责)
4)主要在违约责任方面
5)按照合同以及有关既不能归咎于主要违背自己义务的受益人又不能豁免自己的义务的条文你方将承担全部责任
哪位英语高手能帮我翻译一下这段英语文字吗？要语法正确一点！
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哪位高手能帮我看一下这份日夏养花网英文翻译?
请懂的朋友帮我看一下,是否存在语法错误或是什么的.如果有错,麻烦帮我修改一下好吗?谢谢!!!rnrnrn原文: rn 我的名字叫，今年16岁。我出生在一个每天都充满着温馨和谐气氛的家庭里。从小爸爸就教导我怎样去做人，培养我做一个遇事坚强，做事有毅力，对事情充满责任感的人。而妈妈则给予了我无边的慈爱，潜移默化的培养了我对事细腻，对人友爱的性格特点。我喜欢运动以及音乐。每天，我都会抽出一些时间去打打球或是练习乐器，因为这样不仅能使我身体健康，也能陶冶情操。rn 在校园生活中，我认真学习，遇到难题时善于请教他人，老师和同学们也都很乐意帮助我，学习成绩还不错。在校外，我喜欢交友和聊天，在这些过程中学习一些知识并锻炼我的口才。rn 我目前的目标是努力学好英语和文化知识，因为我深知英语在当今社会的重要性，它是连接世界的纽带，在学习、交流和工作上都起到了很大的帮助。在本国，环境限制了英语的学习，教育水平也不能与国际齐平，使我的英语水平得不到较大的提高。因此，我想寻找一个更好的环境中去学习英语。于是，一位曾到美国学习的朋友向我推荐了她所毕业的学校，了解到只是一所口碑很好的学校。我想，在那里我可以更好地学习文化知识，使自己的文化层次得到更大的提升，并且通过我所学到的知识来了解美国文化。rnrn译文:rnMy name is XXX, 16 years old this year. I was born in a full of warmth every family in harmony. Father taught me how to childhood, to cultivate a strong, I do have something to do with perseverance, sense of responsibility person. But mom, I was given the boundless mercy, exerts a subtle influence on things I trained for friendship, character. I like sports and music. Every day, I will spare some time to play ball or exercise, because such instruments can not only make me healthy body, also can edify sentiment.rnIn campus life, I study hard, ask others at the problems, the teachers and students are very willing to help me, learning achievement is good. Outside, I like making friends and chat, in the process of learning some knowledge and exercise my eloquence.rnI now aims to learn English and cultural knowledge, because I know the importance of English in todayx27s society, it is the connection between the world, in the study, work and communication has played a great help. In the country, environment, education level of learning English can flush with international, make my English level is not improved. Therefore, I want to find a better environment for learning English. Then, one has to study in the United States to my friend recommended her to the school graduation, which is a very good reputation. I think, where I can better learning culture knowledge, make oneself of the cultural level of the greater, and through my knowledge to know about American culture.My name is XXX, 16 years old . I was born in a family full of warm and harmony. My father taught me how to be a real man ---- a strong and persevering man with sense of responsibility . But mom, have given me endless love, she influence me in the detail. I like sports and music. I spend my spare time to play balls or the instruments because it can make me stronger and happier.
你是拿机器翻译的吧，实在是没办法改了，错误太多，不符合英语的语言和文法。没有精力和耐心再改下去了，你既然都要出国了，就花点钱让别人给你写一篇呗，也不差那点钱了，自我介绍还是口语化的更能和老外沟通不然由于两国文化的差异会造成一些误会，而且如果按照你的作文翻译的话，更很僵硬，让外国人听得很别扭，一点小小的建议。
你是拿机器翻译的吧，实在是没办法改了，错误太多，不符合英语的语言和文法。没有精力和耐心再改下去了，你既然都要出国了，就花点钱让别人给你写一篇呗，也不差那点钱了，自我介绍还是口语化的更能和老外沟通不然由于两国文化的差异会造成一些误会，而且如果按照你的作文翻译的话，更很僵硬，让外国人听得很别扭，一点小小的建议。
My name is …. I’m 16 years old. I was born in a family full of warmth and harmony every day. When I was a child, my father taught me how to be a man, and taught me to be strong, perseverant and responsible. My mother gave me boundless love, and she exerted a subtle influence on me which made me be careful with everything and be kind to others. I like sports and music. I will spare some time to play ball or practice some instruments every day because it can make me healthy and happy.
In campus life, I work hard, and when I come across some problems I will ask for help. Teachers and classmates all like to help me, so I have good grades. Outside, I like to chat with my friends from which I learn a lot of knowledge and I practice my oral English.
My present goal is to learn English and cultural knowledge well, because I deeply know the importance of English in modern society. English is the tie of the whole world, and it play an important role in study, communication and work. At home, the surroundings restricts the study of English, and the educational level cannot be balanced with the international level which makes my English not be improved. As a result, I want to find a better environment to learn English. And one of my friends who ever went to America to study recommended her school to me, and I find that it is a well-known school. So I think maybe I can learn knowledge better in that school, and make my cultural level get more improvement and through what I learn I can know more about American culture.
In campus life, I work hard, and when I come across some problems I will ask for help. Teachers and classmates all like to help me, so I have good grades. Outside, I like to chat with my friends from which I learn a lot of knowledge and I practice my oral English.
My present goal is to learn English and cultural knowledge well, because I deeply know the importance of English in modern society. English is the tie of the whole world, and it play an important role in study, communication and work. At home, the surroundings restricts the study of English, and the educational level cannot be balanced with the international level which makes my English not be improved. As a result, I want to find a better environment to learn English. And one of my friends who ever went to America to study recommended her school to me, and I find that it is a well-known school. So I think maybe I can learn knowledge better in that school, and make my cultural level get more improvement and through what I learn I can know more about American culture.
16 years old this year.改为，I'm 16 years old
剩下的没力看了。。。
剩下的没力看了。。。
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